Day 88





One of the few times I've gone to a second draft so far on this adventure.  It didn't fit on the paper I had originally wrote it on, so I copied it over, and revised as I rewrote.  It came out stronger, I think.   I'd consider revising this one again.  I already found something I'd change.

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