Brady Writes

I'm not sure if this is one poem or two. I'm still thinking about it, and the second stanza is kind of unfinished. But I like them.

I think I scored these contributions to National Poetry Month at Brian Presents earlier this month. The first is from Adam of Fridge For Thought fame. The second is from Evelyn . Apparently, it is from a famous German poem. But I don't know which one, so if you can read it, let me know which one it is.

I wanted to revisit the line I had used in March. The line "The wind blew in Detroit today" calls to me as good. I still haven't hit the nail right on the head, though.

I started a creative writing class through Ann Arbor Rec and Ed this week. This was our in-class writing assignment. I didn't manage to get any of the rest of the writing throughout the week done.

I'm a big fan of OneSentence.org . I've submitted a few sentences, but I still haven't been published there yet. My writing this week tended toward the One Sentence model. That's why I had enough room to put two days on one sheet.

One of the few times I've gone to a second draft so far on this adventure.  It didn't fit on the paper I had originally wrote it on, so I copied it over, and revised as I rewrote.  It came out stronger, I think.   I'd consider revising this one again.  I already found something I'd change.

I decided to take a different approach today.  Elizabeth runs a marvelous blog over at Picture a Day , and she posted a very intriguing image today:   So I decided to try to figure out what had happened:

Don't worry, Brian... Only during intermissions and scene changes.